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  • Oswego
    February 06, 2012 - 16:12

    Congrats Debroah. You allow us to 'see and hear' your characters. Relationships reveal themselves perfectly with this skillful portrayal. After I'm finished the story, I'm thinking about the events and the people with more depth and understanding than just the minor actions would have evoked. Well done. Fine writing. - Oswego

  • Shirley
    February 04, 2012 - 12:13

    Wow, that was a beautiful story, though short it was interesting and I wanted to know more about the outcome... Well written - Deborah has the skill to be a writer...